Showing posts with label Contrapuntal. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Contrapuntal. Show all posts

Tuesday, May 3, 2022

PAD 2022 Day 27: Remix


 This poem is presented in its rough draft form for the PAD 2022 challenge and will be revised. 


PAD Prompt: Remix

Poetic Form: Contrapuntal


“How to mend a Broken Heart- Follow”


Follow

The first step is to start.

Follow forever

Taste the pain, a flaky tart,

Follow friends

to inspire the muse of art.

Follow fables


Follow faith

Happiness will feel like a blink,

Follow fads

yet, the cracks will break the link

Follow fancy

to the tears that smudge the ink

Follow flames


Follow fantasy

you chisel into the heavy stones

Follow failure

of time. Stop. Listen to the tones

Follow future

your heartbeat creates for loved ones.

Follow forgotten


Follow fleeting

Tension between the beats will strain

Follow

the rails this pain uses to take us by train.

Follow fiction

At the next stop, taste the rain.


Wednesday, July 22, 2020

Poetic Form 41: Contrapuntal

All the World

It feels like the weight of the world
is strapped to me like a backpack
that someone has tighten the straps
so tight they dig into my armpits
The moon is a spotlight
And I am on stage
At the end of my driveway
I can’t shake the weight of the world
around to a comfortable spot
or remove my arms from the pack
without dislocating my shoulders
My audience is every star in the galaxy
The crickets my orchestra
So I trudge forward with the weight of the world
But I never received the script
For this show and the moon is out
Casting light on my spot
sighing like Robert Frost
at the fork in the road as others
pass me by, laughing in groups
And I don’t know which way is stage right


Poetic Form #41: Contrapuntal
A contrapuntal poem intertwines two (or more) separate poems into a single
new poem. The traditional format is using one line of poem A, then a 
corresponding line in poem B from start to finish, but you can combine them
in different ways. I took the creative liberty of messing with the form.

Poem A: “Weight of the world” - available in my book From My Years.
Poem B: “The Moon is a Spotlight” - Unpublished.