Day 22 Prompt: Nature
Form: hay(na)ku
Days
call me
away from youth.
Day 22 Prompt: Nature
Form: hay(na)ku
Days
call me
away from youth.
Late on a January night,
blizzard conditions are in sight.
Bitter cold drops to stake a claim.
The winter wind doesn’t know my name.
The snap hooks on a flagpole keep
uneven time for those asleep.
I hear Mother Nature’s fierce claim.
The winter wind doesn’t know my name.
The rumble of long vowels tells me
I am an outcast to these trees,
swaying outside my window frame.
The winter wind doesn’t know my name.
It is darker on the other
side of the window. The covers
no shield against this dark night’s aim.
The winter wind doesn’t know my name.
Poetic Form #80: Kyrielle
The kyrielle is a French four-line stanza form that uses a refrain in the fourth line.
Each line contains 8 syllables. Traditional kyrielle poems are written in iambic
tetrameter. The rhyme scheme is flexible and really up to the poet. Some common
schemes are (B is the refrain):
aabB
abaB
aaaB
abcB
The poem can also be as long as the poet wants.
Another storm, my hands become
numb. The wind cuts like a bass drum
along the street, angry with us.
Eyes closing I shy away from
Mother Nature’s judgment. Night plus
time reveals a clearing sky, thus
I can see Orion standing,
shield ready as if he mistrusts
the oncoming day. Commanding
the horizon from expanding.
I wonder if he can save me,
from the storm I am withstanding.
My breath, white and dense, show the degree
the night has fallen. The grey trees
whisper over my head, “No, he
will not step from the stars for thee.”
Poetic Form #79: Interlocking Rubaiyat
The Interlocking Rubaiyat is composed of quatrains following
an aaba rhyme pattern. The successive quatrain uses the
unrhymed line as the rhyme for that stanza. A three-stanza
rubaiyat rhyme scheme would be: aaba/bbcb/ccdc. Sometimes
the final stanza rhymes all four lines. The lines are usually tetrameter
and pentameter. Robert Frost’s "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening”
is a classic example.